Watched it 3rd time in a row.

It's so random and animu! I love it!
Wish it could be longer!
Make more!

So emotional, that i want to puke my guts out.

Plot is really, really simple. Characters are done well, rememberable and banal. Many moments were just too dramatic and emotional. Needs greater improvement on style and design, it's childish.
Kudos for length and voice acting.

I lol'd

One's passion with dolls interrupted by grandma. Now ain't it nice?

One boob is bigger than the other. :D

Yeah, anatomicaly it's correct. :D
Colouring is exploding, and that perky smile gives is indeed in place.
Something is missing in left shoulder.

Needs precise lines and structure.

Hands are way too small. Armour needs depth and some structure. I like the middle part of the body. Work on that helmet!